I'm using one of my new un-introduced characters who will appear in a few weeks (likely months) time.
Character on: Renzak
Basics
1. Does your character have a long, rare or unusual name? [ or if she has a name that reflects your own name] +1
(I guess unusual since I just made it up.)
2. Does your character have more than one name they go by? [not counting nick names] +1
(He tends to have lots of nicknames, the most well known is the Mercenary and the Patriotic one)
3. [count all that apply]
He/she is not of their own race even though he/she looks like it? +1
Half a Human? +1
[half]An Irken? +1
[half]A Vortian? +1
[half]? A Meekrobian+1
(He's Irken and proud of it.)
4. He/she belongs to a royal or well-to-do family? +1
(Genetically no, naturally no)
5. Does He/she have amnesia? +1
(Nope, no amnesia.)
It heals as the story goes on? +1
(Theirs nothing to be healed)
2 out of 10
Looks
1. He/she has very long hair/antennae that curls on and on or horns with unusual color or an unusual colored skin tone for her race? +1
(Normal male type antenna except its more pick axed shape with the upper one being shorter then the bottom one, also the right one is severed at the middle. I'm not sure if that counts or not.)
Does he/she have a considerably attractive face? [above average to you] +1
(Average looking)
2. He/she has wings/can fly? +1
(Nope)
3. He/she has no fat and doesn't look chubby after eating junk and doesn't exercise +1
(The no fat part is true, but he doesn't eat junk unless its the only thing he's got.)
4. Does he/she belong to some kind of label? [ex. Punk, Goth, Lolita, Emo, Prep, etc.] +1
(Junkie, yes you read that right.)
5. His or her eyes are incredibly shiny and sparkly for no reason? +1
(20/20 vision, nothing out of the usual)
6. His/her eyes have a weird color like silver or gold...maybe rainbow? +1
(Normal red.)
Are his/her eyes more than one color? +1
(Both the same color)
7. Do you describe his/her looks in the first chapter? +1
(He doesn't even appear int he first chapter.)
Do you use words "gorgeous" "Mysterious" "Stunning" "Beautiful" "Perfect" for your female character or for a male character would you use "Dashingly handsome" "Muscular" "Charming" when describing him? +1
(Probably muscular.)
1 out of 10
Past
1. He/she had a terrible past +1
and he/she angst's about it +1
(Not really terrible, maybe for other people but not him.)
2. Is he/she an orphan? +1
(I don't think that applies to a race that's tube born.)
3. Was he/she physically abused? +1
mentally abused? +1
molested/raped? +1
all the other characters know about it [especially cannon characters] +1
(No, grew up relatively normal except his obsession with weaponry at an early age... and combat drugs later on.)
5. He/she saw a death of her family member +1
(No family)
it was his/her fault and thinks it's their own fault +1
(No family)
6. Is he or she related to any of the main cannon characters +1
(Nope.)
0 out of 10
Character
1. He/She has a very dark or very cheery character +1
(He's more proud of what he dose and isn't excessively cruel... unless someone knows something important and won't talk.)
2. He/She has no enemies +1
(He considers everyone not Irken and defects as enemies so I think it counts.)
3. He/She has no friends +1
(Unless you count his SIR or his named guns then no.)
4. He/She has a "Big point of view" [ex. "It`s ok that my Girlfriend/Boyfriend left me, there are so many other girls/boys in the world"] +1
(Not really, relatively one tracked mine.)
5. He/She has a best friend that stays that way during all the story +1
(No friends, but his SIR dose follow him around, so I don't think it counts.)
6. Everyone who dislikes him/her ends up humiliated, arrested and/or dead +1
(Dead)
Killed by him +1
(yes)
Killed by his girlfriend +1
(Their is no girlfriend.)
7. He/She always understands others and gives the answer to any problem of their life +1
(Nope, unless the problem has a military meaning.)
8. He/She shares same characteristics/hobbies with a cannon character +1
(He shares Zim's ideals on how the Irkens should rule everyone.)
5 out of 10
Romance
1. Your character seems to have experienced more romance than all the other characters in the story +1
(He's got no time for romance.)
2. His/Her girlfriend/boyfriend is was a cannon character +1
more than one cannon character +1
a character from a cannon couple +1
a character you would like to have as girlfriend/boyfriend +1
it was love from the first sight +1
(No love life of any kind except for his guns.)
3. A womanizer or slept with many guys? +1
(Nope)
She/he`s bisexual +1
(Nope)
4. he/she had sex with a cannon character +1
more than one cannon character +1
a character you would like to have sex with +1
(Nope)
0 out of 10
Other
1. He/she's a musician +1
An Invader +1
a dancer +1
Daughter/son of a prostitute +1
(He wants to be an Invader but constantly fails the psychological test.)
2. He/she's better than a cannon character in some specific area he/she`s good at [ex. solving paranormal mysteries like Dib. Tallest favorite invader unlike Zim. Wants revenge unlike Tak. More Goth than Gaz, etc.] +1
(He's a better fighter than Zim for sure.)
3. He/she's not from cannon planets (IE: Irk, Vort, Earth, Meekrob...) +1
(Irk)
He/she somehow popped in the fictional world from the real world +1
(Nope, canon planet.)
4. He/she doesn't have to pay for his/her actions/crimes/mistakes +1
(He's been locked up in prisons for vigilantism and being a bit of a defect.)
5. His/her enemies are complete opposites of him/her +1
(No not really considering they're trying to kill each other.)
6. He/She looks and acts exactly like Zim/Tak with different color eyes and clothes +1
(He's a lot more violent and direct then them.)
1 out of 10
To the anti-sue traits!
2. remove one point if your character is a smoker
(He doesn't smoke, unless you count the exhaust of vehicles and the smell of Napalm
)
3. he has a disease that doesn't heal during the story -1
(He's healthy physically)
4. He has overweight [a little doesn't count] -1
(He's very fit.)
5. he`s in love with a character who doesn't love her back -1
(The only thing he loves is his guns and medals, which he made himself.)
6. he`s weak mentally or physically -1
(Mentally, he's a paranoid sociopath. But I don't think that makes him mentally weak.)
Add em up:
9 points total!
results~
0-5 points- the Anti-Sue/Stu
Your character is definitely an opposite of Mary Sue. It's obvious that you've been trying to protect your character from suedom, but a few more good traits wouldn't hurt.
5-15 points- Original Character
Congratulations! You've created an interesting, well-balanced original character! ^-^ you sure need a lot of skills to create such a great character, good job!
15-25 points- boarding-Sue/Stu
Hmm... I can't say your character is a Mary-sue or Stu, but it's really close to it! You should edit them a little to make him/her more realistic and interesting!
25-35 points the Mary-Sue/gary-Stu
My oh my, we have a trouble! D: I understand that you tried to create a nice and interesting character that others would like, but you've overdone it. Remember, a character has to have flaws! If you don't want to ruin your fanfiction, try to rework your character.
35< points the Ultra-Sue/Stu
OH MY GOD, NOT THAT! BURN IT! You've created a monster, my friend. Take a blank sheet and create another, more realistic character
**Remember this test is for fun!
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